meeting of the mind(revised.strong language contained)
Meeting of the mind~ I remember the first day i met Benny. Typical morning. Got up late, no time for breakfast, kiss the wife good-bye and out the door. The minute I walked onto my floor, I could feel...
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I liked this so much, Lisa! What a kick when I realized what was happening. Very cool twist at the end! The last two lines blew me away. Very well written and clever!The Pickle Queen
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(((((((Dawn-o)))))))))Thank you.Do ya think I should go for the elongated version?Aw,hell...........just happy that you liked it is enough!much love to ya
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Lisa, this was great! Very clever introduction; had me thinking it was some coworkers at a local bar. When the realization hits, it's rather chilling. In addition to talking nasty to patients and...
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Thank you Rena! I've been working on the full version where all the characters come in one stage at a time.And yes,my spacing does need work.Just re-read it and it is kind of glopped together!I really...
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I really loved the twist in your story, very original, Zaida
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Thank you Zaida.........am getting ready to post the revised story soon.......looking forward to your feedback on it.Lisa
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Oh, I LOVE your revisions, Lisa! I love all the details...like him walking his fingers down the railing to the cellar. You really can tell a story! For you to capture the essence of each character so...
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ah, finnaly got the chance to read something entertaiming in "normal" English... interesting story, will read it again late in night...
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(((((((((Dawn)))))))))))Thank you my friend for re-reading this! I still feel it needs something more.......hee,hee,,,,,,,never satisfied!Venus,thank you for taking time to read this,any comments or...
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